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Sketchy One Corrected

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My third correction :)

Basically not much wrong with this one proportionally-speaking.

-Just watch out and make sure your poses are more "natural."

-You'll benefit if you give the hair more volume- it'll look better

-Pay attention to those boobs ^^;

I forgot to mention in the image:

-The eyes are ever-so-slightly too wide and close-together. If you make them slightly smaller wdith-wise, the closeness issue is fixed.

-The nose should be just a tad bit higher.
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Ale-94-black-white's avatar
amazing!! thanks a lot for the correction it is very helpful :hug: ~<3
I specially like how you corrected her hand, because I had no idea how to draw it :p I also thank you for the eye correction, yeah, they were a bit big didn't they?
and about the pose, you are right in everything XD the new pose you gave her seems more natural and relaxed ^^
thanks a looot!!! :heart: