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Dress Time Correction

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Some things to work on...

- Your collarbone placement. They're not just lines you can put anywhere ^^
- The poofy hair. This is easily fixed by just doing a quick guideline of a bald head underneath. It helps you keep it in check.
-The boob thing is something many people have trouble with. Hopefully my notes help :)

- And lastly... please please please try to draw the hands and body more! I can't really help you without seeing where you need the help.

Anyway, hope that helped.



Final note: I have trouble lately keeping my shoulders in check. Please be aware her left shoulder sticks out a bit too much. I'm still learning as well~
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Silver-Solace's avatar
Another great correction! I really enjoy reading yours :) Nice pointers!

lol I have shoulder issues at times too xD; I don't think her left shoulder is all that noticeable though. I didn't see it until you pointed it out.