Deamon Girlie Correction

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My first correction for the improvement club!

Anyway, to summarize a few points I made:

-The overall proportions are pretty good. The head was slightly too big is all.

-The breasts, eyes, and shoulders were a bit crooked and uneven.

-The placement of the legs and arms were at rather extreme angles which made the character look uncomfortable and about to fall over!

I tried to keep it as similar to the original drawing as possible! I did change some things based on my aesthetics though, so please only take those as suggestions.

Hope this helped~